Finally!!! an update on Perfect!
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angelshillTITLE: Perfect
CHARACTERS: Matsumoto Jun, Inoue Mao, Kuroki Meisa, Oguri Shun, Yamada Yuu, Ashida Mana, Ohno Satoshi, Fujigaya Taisuke, Sakurai Sho, Oomasa Aya, Ninomiya Kazunari, Nakai Masahiro, Joushima Shigeru, Matsuoka Masahiro, Kusanagi Tsuyoshi, Inohara Yoshihiko
GENRE: AU
RATINGS: PG
DISCLAIMER: The only thing i own in this story is the plot...
SUMMARY: People say that they are a match made in heaven. They say that if this is heaven’s doing, then heaven has got it in for them. Two people forced into a relationship they didn’t really want because of an obligation they never really declined or accepted. And they’re living a life that everyone thought is perfect.
Chapter1,
The Honeymoon (?)
“Why do you always wake up so early?” Mao asked, half-jokingly, half-curiously as she joined Jun who was then sitting by the patio, buried in the book in his hand and with a cup of coffee to his side.
It was already the 4th of the five-day honeymoon their parents had gifted them for the wedding and Mao had just woken up.
Technically speaking, both sets of parents wanted a much more lavish honeymoon, or at least one that would take them further away from home, to inspire the moment so to speak. But both she and Jun had insisted that they preferred to spend their so-called honeymoon at the seaside property. It used to be two separate properties actually, not that it was ever treated that way, until the day it was transferred to their joint name the moment Mao turned old enough to legally own a property, way before they even acknowledged to the public that they’d soon be getting married.
For one thing, Jun loved the ocean; swimming, surfing, snorkeling; name it, the guy has done it, while Mao loved the breeze and the feel of the sand beneath her feet. When they were younger, their parents would always bring them there for the holidays, or breaks. It was, by far, both their favorite place to be in.
For another, the place holds quite a significant bearing for them, sentimental, one might say, but not exactly for the reason their family would assume.
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10 years ago…
Mao still could not believe what she was told as slumped down on the beach, her ears still ringing in disbelief of what she just heard, her pride indignant because of what she was just told.
When her parents suddenly whisked her to their beachside property, Mao thought she knew what was going to happen, even more so when she learned that Jun and his family had just arrived next door too. Their families had always been close like that, sharing moments together. And there was something to be shared all right, something she admitted to her mother the night before.
Her biggest, ultimate, and super long-time crush had just asked her out for a date!
When she was told to meet the elders, their endearing tag when the people involved are both sets of parents and grandfathers, that morning in the living room, she almost wanted to laugh and roll her eyes. She thought she was just going to receive the sort of lecture Jun’s sister, Yuu, got when the elders found out that she had gone out on dates.
She’d heard it all before. She was there with Jun and Taisuke when Yuu was getting her lecture. Jun, who was already 13, and Taipi, her nickname for Taisuke, her younger brother, aged 7, were highly amused about it, Mao found it interesting.
But when she thought she was just about to hear a different version of that lecture, she thought so entirely wrong. It had something to do with her upcoming date all right, but it wasn’t a lecture. Far from it. It was the biggest shock of her life. Because after the quite lengthy prologues that came from both Tsuyoshi and Matsuoka, Masahiro dropped the bomb.
“It has long been agreed that you and Jun will get married.”
She almost thought it was a joke, and while Shigeru and Masahiro are known for being jesters every once in a while, she knew that this time it wasn’t, not with the way Masahiro said his piece and Shigeru rounding it up with “You and Jun are perfect for each other.”
To say it dramatically, it was as if the life she knew crumbled before her very eyes. It was true that she had expected hers and Jun’s lives to be somehow intertwined into way, way into the future but she never thought it was going to be like that.
But shocked, and indignant, as she may be, she didn’t walk out on that ‘meeting’ even though she really wanted to. She still had manners, and love and respect for all the elders, besides, they weren’t exactly giving orders, they were just giving statements. But the moment she was allowed to leave, she ran fast, out of the house and into the beach.
“Huh?” she heard a familiar (but not exactly among those she really wanted to hear) tone exclaim from behind. “Here I thought you’d be a bit happier. Sho told me Mr. Guitarist had just invited you out for a date.”
Mao snorted, not even remotely surprised that Sho would tell him that, she and Sho may be friends but Sho and Jun were closer, plus, they are both boys. She didn’t even have to turn around for the guy to enter her line of vision, Jun had went on ahead and stood in front of her.
“Mr. Guitarist,” she noted his term “has a name.”
“Yeah, yeah,” Jun chuckled dismissively. “All the same, I expected you to be happier than this. A lot happier.”
Mao simply looked into his eyes for a while, caught in that conundrum of telling him what she was just told or not. She wasn’t that sure if he knows or not after all. On one side, he should already know about it since he is older. On the other, if he does, then why hasn’t he told her before?
“I just met the elders,” she ended up sighing. “I was told that I am already engaged.”
It turns out that Jun already knew about their situation as he ended up sighing as he plopped next to her on the sand. “So you’ve been told…”
“You knew?!” she exclaimed, turning around to the guy. “You knew about this?! Why didn’t you tell me?”
Jun snorted. “Like I was going to tell an 8 year old girl that we are arranged to be married,” he said. “I guess they decided to break in the news when the hormones start to kick in.”
Mao couldn’t help but sigh again, this time, in defeat, the guy does have a point in that.
“So what are we going to do?” she ended up asking.
“About what?” Jun asked.
“About this!” Mao exclaimed, gesturing to the two of them. “Our parents and grandparents are talking about the two us getting married!”
“So?” Jun replied. “We go about our normal lives, that’s what we’re going to do, that’s what we’re supposed to do.” When Mao had opened her mouth as if to exclaim, he immediately added “I mean, they didn’t forbid you to go on that date with Mr. Guitarist, didn’t they?”
“Well,” Mao ended up starting, recalling nothing of that sort being said earlier. “But, but what if I want to marry him?” she ended up asking sheepishly. “Or if not him then some other guy I had fallen in love with?”
There was something akin to amusement in Jun’s voice and face when he turned to her and said “Then get married! That’s what I would do.”
Mao couldn’t help but be amazed and worried at the same time. “Aren’t you afraid of breaking their hearts?”
“Shouldn’t you be more afraid of breaking yours?” Jun returned simply. “Look, those six old people will understand, even though they won’t at first. They eventually will. They just need to know that you’d be in good hands.”
“You think?” she asked, still in worry.
“Of course,” Jun grinned. “Besides, if that day ever does come, tell me, I’ll help you tell them.”
“You will?”
“Of course! We’re staying in the same boat, we have to help each other out,” he said before adding cheekily “Though to be honest, I think you’d have a hard time convincing them that you’d be better off with him.”
“Why?” Mao ended up asking, her eyebrow raised although there’s already a smile on her lips.
Jun grinned. “Well, you have to convince them that your guy is better than me, and between you and me, let’s just both admit that it’s going to be hard,” he winked.
Mao snorted. “You’re an amazingly egotistical man, you know,” she told him.
“And the girls love it,” Jun grinned. “Lighten up, worst case scenario is that we actually do end up marrying each other,” he laughed and Mao couldn’t help but laugh with him. She wasn’t in such a bad situation after all.
And then she remembered something. “Wait, you were told when I was 8?” she asked.
“Yeah, why?”
“Your hormones kicked in when you were 12?” Mao couldn’t help but exclaim.
“What?!” Jun replied with a shrug. “I am a boy!”
-----
Well, she wouldn’t really call it a worst case scenario but they did end up marrying all right and the beach is where the two of them had come in terms with that possibility, and that meant something.
“You just always sleep in,” Jun chuckled, looking up from his book to turn to her. “Besides, working for the family has its downsides. Dad had me up at 4 on my first day at work. How was your sleep?”
“All right, I guess,” she smiled, shrugging a bit as she pulled the blanket she had around her tighter. She was still in her pajamas, to be honest, simply dragging the blanket with her when she woke up and for good measure too since the wind facing seaside at 7:00 in the morning is still a bit chilly.
Jun, seeing that, chuckled as he reached for his still steaming mug of coffee and handed it to her. “Here, drink some.”
Mao simply beamed as she reached for the cup, a good mouthful could really help. After savoring the warmth that spread over her body with the help of the coffee, she asked Jun “So, what are we going to do today?”
Jun chuckled. “I was just about to ask you!”
The two of them are enjoying their ‘honeymoon’ all right, from scuba-diving to plain sight-seeing, she and Jun had done almost everything everyone would expect the two of them do during those five days, all but one. And that ‘one’ just happens to be the main point of every honeymoon.
To be plainly honest, they weren’t even sharing the same room!
It was easy actually, to do just that, especially since no one else is at the property except the two of them. It had been arranged that for the duration of the ‘honeymoon’, the helps would not be in the premise unless Jun or Mao asks them to, and for the past few days, they only called them in whenever they leave the house.
It was one of those things they didn’t really need to talk about but both already agreed before they dived into the thick of it all.
They are going to be husband and wife, and they are going to be that in sickness and in health, for richer and for poorer. They are going to follow those stuff said during the mass, except for one, the “go forth and multiply” part.
“How about we just stay in tonight?” Mao ended up suggesting after a while.
“Why, you tired?” Jun asked, straightening up, looking at her in concern.
“No,” Mao chuckled, shaking her head. “I just don’t feel like going out today. Is that all right with you?”
“Not a problem I guess,” Jun said after a while. “You can cook us breakfast.”
“Why am I the one cooking?!” Mao complained good heartedly.
Jun grinned. “Well, you are the wife.”
-----
“So how does a girl manage to burn egg?” Jun couldn’t help but chuckle as he placed a plate of eggs and bacon in front of a pouting Mao on the kitchen table.
Jun had taken over the cooking when, minutes after Mao entered the kitchen, he smelled something suspiciously burnt. Mao had denied it when he asked but when he entered the kitchen and saw everything for himself, Mao really didn’t have much of a choice.
“That would be a woman, not a girl,” Mao corrected, still with a pout on her lips. “And not because I am one, doesn’t mean I have to know how to cook.”
“Yeah, but they’re just eggs,” Jun said good-naturedly, taking his seat in front of her. “Everybody knows how to cook eggs.”
“Well, I’m not everybody,” Mao mumbled taking her first bite. “How’d you learn how to cook anyway?”
“College,” Jun shrugged and it was answer enough. After all, a few years into college, Jun was finally allowed to leave the premise of his parent’s house (or any house filled with house helps) for the dorm. “Day after tomorrow, we go back home, are you ready?” he asked after a while.
“No,” Mao answered with a chuckle. “I feel like running away to be honest.”
Jun couldn’t help but chuckle back. “A bit too late for that, don’t you think?”
Mao simply looked at him before she sighed. “Yeah, you’re right. I’m just scared, I guess,” she ended up admitting. “I don’t know what to do.”
“We’ll figure it out,” Jun smiled in assurance, his hand reaching out to wrap around Mao’s. Mao found herself smiling back.
-----TBC-----
first off, i have to be completely honest...
when Perfect first came to me, i was living in another city, working a different job in an entirely different company, surrounded by different people and having an entirely different work schedule... all in all, it was eons ago... okay, not really, it was just last year! but a lot has happened and i have to admit that i have forgotten parts of what i had in mind for the story (some i hadn't but the others are completely nada!), especially since up until a couple of months ago, i was working on a different JunxMao AU. that, plus i lost my notes on the story during the transfer.
and for a while, when i started working on this story again, i actually was afraid that with the parts i would have to make this story really, really short...
fortunately, inspiration hit me, (in the person of Taipi, yeah, him, again! i know) and well, let's just say that things got a bit interesting for this story (for me at least, hope you guys do feel the same)...
so with that, i finally got to work on Perfect! phew!
anyway, on the story itself, a bit of a reshuffle on some of the cast, bumping off some and adding in three, plus one i've always planned to add before but never got around to putting in...
which ends us up with, how was the story?
like it or not?
CHARACTERS: Matsumoto Jun, Inoue Mao, Kuroki Meisa, Oguri Shun, Yamada Yuu, Ashida Mana, Ohno Satoshi, Fujigaya Taisuke, Sakurai Sho, Oomasa Aya, Ninomiya Kazunari, Nakai Masahiro, Joushima Shigeru, Matsuoka Masahiro, Kusanagi Tsuyoshi, Inohara Yoshihiko
GENRE: AU
RATINGS: PG
DISCLAIMER: The only thing i own in this story is the plot...
SUMMARY: People say that they are a match made in heaven. They say that if this is heaven’s doing, then heaven has got it in for them. Two people forced into a relationship they didn’t really want because of an obligation they never really declined or accepted. And they’re living a life that everyone thought is perfect.
Chapter1,
The Honeymoon (?)
“Why do you always wake up so early?” Mao asked, half-jokingly, half-curiously as she joined Jun who was then sitting by the patio, buried in the book in his hand and with a cup of coffee to his side.
It was already the 4th of the five-day honeymoon their parents had gifted them for the wedding and Mao had just woken up.
Technically speaking, both sets of parents wanted a much more lavish honeymoon, or at least one that would take them further away from home, to inspire the moment so to speak. But both she and Jun had insisted that they preferred to spend their so-called honeymoon at the seaside property. It used to be two separate properties actually, not that it was ever treated that way, until the day it was transferred to their joint name the moment Mao turned old enough to legally own a property, way before they even acknowledged to the public that they’d soon be getting married.
For one thing, Jun loved the ocean; swimming, surfing, snorkeling; name it, the guy has done it, while Mao loved the breeze and the feel of the sand beneath her feet. When they were younger, their parents would always bring them there for the holidays, or breaks. It was, by far, both their favorite place to be in.
For another, the place holds quite a significant bearing for them, sentimental, one might say, but not exactly for the reason their family would assume.
-----
10 years ago…
Mao still could not believe what she was told as slumped down on the beach, her ears still ringing in disbelief of what she just heard, her pride indignant because of what she was just told.
When her parents suddenly whisked her to their beachside property, Mao thought she knew what was going to happen, even more so when she learned that Jun and his family had just arrived next door too. Their families had always been close like that, sharing moments together. And there was something to be shared all right, something she admitted to her mother the night before.
Her biggest, ultimate, and super long-time crush had just asked her out for a date!
When she was told to meet the elders, their endearing tag when the people involved are both sets of parents and grandfathers, that morning in the living room, she almost wanted to laugh and roll her eyes. She thought she was just going to receive the sort of lecture Jun’s sister, Yuu, got when the elders found out that she had gone out on dates.
She’d heard it all before. She was there with Jun and Taisuke when Yuu was getting her lecture. Jun, who was already 13, and Taipi, her nickname for Taisuke, her younger brother, aged 7, were highly amused about it, Mao found it interesting.
But when she thought she was just about to hear a different version of that lecture, she thought so entirely wrong. It had something to do with her upcoming date all right, but it wasn’t a lecture. Far from it. It was the biggest shock of her life. Because after the quite lengthy prologues that came from both Tsuyoshi and Matsuoka, Masahiro dropped the bomb.
“It has long been agreed that you and Jun will get married.”
She almost thought it was a joke, and while Shigeru and Masahiro are known for being jesters every once in a while, she knew that this time it wasn’t, not with the way Masahiro said his piece and Shigeru rounding it up with “You and Jun are perfect for each other.”
To say it dramatically, it was as if the life she knew crumbled before her very eyes. It was true that she had expected hers and Jun’s lives to be somehow intertwined into way, way into the future but she never thought it was going to be like that.
But shocked, and indignant, as she may be, she didn’t walk out on that ‘meeting’ even though she really wanted to. She still had manners, and love and respect for all the elders, besides, they weren’t exactly giving orders, they were just giving statements. But the moment she was allowed to leave, she ran fast, out of the house and into the beach.
“Huh?” she heard a familiar (but not exactly among those she really wanted to hear) tone exclaim from behind. “Here I thought you’d be a bit happier. Sho told me Mr. Guitarist had just invited you out for a date.”
Mao snorted, not even remotely surprised that Sho would tell him that, she and Sho may be friends but Sho and Jun were closer, plus, they are both boys. She didn’t even have to turn around for the guy to enter her line of vision, Jun had went on ahead and stood in front of her.
“Mr. Guitarist,” she noted his term “has a name.”
“Yeah, yeah,” Jun chuckled dismissively. “All the same, I expected you to be happier than this. A lot happier.”
Mao simply looked into his eyes for a while, caught in that conundrum of telling him what she was just told or not. She wasn’t that sure if he knows or not after all. On one side, he should already know about it since he is older. On the other, if he does, then why hasn’t he told her before?
“I just met the elders,” she ended up sighing. “I was told that I am already engaged.”
It turns out that Jun already knew about their situation as he ended up sighing as he plopped next to her on the sand. “So you’ve been told…”
“You knew?!” she exclaimed, turning around to the guy. “You knew about this?! Why didn’t you tell me?”
Jun snorted. “Like I was going to tell an 8 year old girl that we are arranged to be married,” he said. “I guess they decided to break in the news when the hormones start to kick in.”
Mao couldn’t help but sigh again, this time, in defeat, the guy does have a point in that.
“So what are we going to do?” she ended up asking.
“About what?” Jun asked.
“About this!” Mao exclaimed, gesturing to the two of them. “Our parents and grandparents are talking about the two us getting married!”
“So?” Jun replied. “We go about our normal lives, that’s what we’re going to do, that’s what we’re supposed to do.” When Mao had opened her mouth as if to exclaim, he immediately added “I mean, they didn’t forbid you to go on that date with Mr. Guitarist, didn’t they?”
“Well,” Mao ended up starting, recalling nothing of that sort being said earlier. “But, but what if I want to marry him?” she ended up asking sheepishly. “Or if not him then some other guy I had fallen in love with?”
There was something akin to amusement in Jun’s voice and face when he turned to her and said “Then get married! That’s what I would do.”
Mao couldn’t help but be amazed and worried at the same time. “Aren’t you afraid of breaking their hearts?”
“Shouldn’t you be more afraid of breaking yours?” Jun returned simply. “Look, those six old people will understand, even though they won’t at first. They eventually will. They just need to know that you’d be in good hands.”
“You think?” she asked, still in worry.
“Of course,” Jun grinned. “Besides, if that day ever does come, tell me, I’ll help you tell them.”
“You will?”
“Of course! We’re staying in the same boat, we have to help each other out,” he said before adding cheekily “Though to be honest, I think you’d have a hard time convincing them that you’d be better off with him.”
“Why?” Mao ended up asking, her eyebrow raised although there’s already a smile on her lips.
Jun grinned. “Well, you have to convince them that your guy is better than me, and between you and me, let’s just both admit that it’s going to be hard,” he winked.
Mao snorted. “You’re an amazingly egotistical man, you know,” she told him.
“And the girls love it,” Jun grinned. “Lighten up, worst case scenario is that we actually do end up marrying each other,” he laughed and Mao couldn’t help but laugh with him. She wasn’t in such a bad situation after all.
And then she remembered something. “Wait, you were told when I was 8?” she asked.
“Yeah, why?”
“Your hormones kicked in when you were 12?” Mao couldn’t help but exclaim.
“What?!” Jun replied with a shrug. “I am a boy!”
-----
Well, she wouldn’t really call it a worst case scenario but they did end up marrying all right and the beach is where the two of them had come in terms with that possibility, and that meant something.
“You just always sleep in,” Jun chuckled, looking up from his book to turn to her. “Besides, working for the family has its downsides. Dad had me up at 4 on my first day at work. How was your sleep?”
“All right, I guess,” she smiled, shrugging a bit as she pulled the blanket she had around her tighter. She was still in her pajamas, to be honest, simply dragging the blanket with her when she woke up and for good measure too since the wind facing seaside at 7:00 in the morning is still a bit chilly.
Jun, seeing that, chuckled as he reached for his still steaming mug of coffee and handed it to her. “Here, drink some.”
Mao simply beamed as she reached for the cup, a good mouthful could really help. After savoring the warmth that spread over her body with the help of the coffee, she asked Jun “So, what are we going to do today?”
Jun chuckled. “I was just about to ask you!”
The two of them are enjoying their ‘honeymoon’ all right, from scuba-diving to plain sight-seeing, she and Jun had done almost everything everyone would expect the two of them do during those five days, all but one. And that ‘one’ just happens to be the main point of every honeymoon.
To be plainly honest, they weren’t even sharing the same room!
It was easy actually, to do just that, especially since no one else is at the property except the two of them. It had been arranged that for the duration of the ‘honeymoon’, the helps would not be in the premise unless Jun or Mao asks them to, and for the past few days, they only called them in whenever they leave the house.
It was one of those things they didn’t really need to talk about but both already agreed before they dived into the thick of it all.
They are going to be husband and wife, and they are going to be that in sickness and in health, for richer and for poorer. They are going to follow those stuff said during the mass, except for one, the “go forth and multiply” part.
“How about we just stay in tonight?” Mao ended up suggesting after a while.
“Why, you tired?” Jun asked, straightening up, looking at her in concern.
“No,” Mao chuckled, shaking her head. “I just don’t feel like going out today. Is that all right with you?”
“Not a problem I guess,” Jun said after a while. “You can cook us breakfast.”
“Why am I the one cooking?!” Mao complained good heartedly.
Jun grinned. “Well, you are the wife.”
-----
“So how does a girl manage to burn egg?” Jun couldn’t help but chuckle as he placed a plate of eggs and bacon in front of a pouting Mao on the kitchen table.
Jun had taken over the cooking when, minutes after Mao entered the kitchen, he smelled something suspiciously burnt. Mao had denied it when he asked but when he entered the kitchen and saw everything for himself, Mao really didn’t have much of a choice.
“That would be a woman, not a girl,” Mao corrected, still with a pout on her lips. “And not because I am one, doesn’t mean I have to know how to cook.”
“Yeah, but they’re just eggs,” Jun said good-naturedly, taking his seat in front of her. “Everybody knows how to cook eggs.”
“Well, I’m not everybody,” Mao mumbled taking her first bite. “How’d you learn how to cook anyway?”
“College,” Jun shrugged and it was answer enough. After all, a few years into college, Jun was finally allowed to leave the premise of his parent’s house (or any house filled with house helps) for the dorm. “Day after tomorrow, we go back home, are you ready?” he asked after a while.
“No,” Mao answered with a chuckle. “I feel like running away to be honest.”
Jun couldn’t help but chuckle back. “A bit too late for that, don’t you think?”
Mao simply looked at him before she sighed. “Yeah, you’re right. I’m just scared, I guess,” she ended up admitting. “I don’t know what to do.”
“We’ll figure it out,” Jun smiled in assurance, his hand reaching out to wrap around Mao’s. Mao found herself smiling back.
-----TBC-----
first off, i have to be completely honest...
when Perfect first came to me, i was living in another city, working a different job in an entirely different company, surrounded by different people and having an entirely different work schedule... all in all, it was eons ago... okay, not really, it was just last year! but a lot has happened and i have to admit that i have forgotten parts of what i had in mind for the story (some i hadn't but the others are completely nada!), especially since up until a couple of months ago, i was working on a different JunxMao AU. that, plus i lost my notes on the story during the transfer.
and for a while, when i started working on this story again, i actually was afraid that with the parts i would have to make this story really, really short...
fortunately, inspiration hit me, (in the person of Taipi, yeah, him, again! i know) and well, let's just say that things got a bit interesting for this story (for me at least, hope you guys do feel the same)...
so with that, i finally got to work on Perfect! phew!
anyway, on the story itself, a bit of a reshuffle on some of the cast, bumping off some and adding in three, plus one i've always planned to add before but never got around to putting in...
which ends us up with, how was the story?
like it or not?
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Date: 2012-02-04 07:24 pm (UTC)Finally you updated this one..! Thank you so much for sharing it *grins*
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Date: 2012-02-04 07:33 pm (UTC)hope you like it...
and thanks... :)
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Date: 2012-02-05 02:41 am (UTC)And your Jun is always adorable.
I hope you don't mind I am adding you as a friend?
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Date: 2012-02-05 04:09 am (UTC)i don't know, i think i enjoy writing stories like this, touching the "are they or aren't they going to fall in love" story line... it's actually fun! lol!
Jun was, and still is, my first JE love and he got me to all of this so yeah, i might be a biased in my writings with him...
thank you for adding... added you back... :)
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Date: 2012-02-04 10:41 pm (UTC)I am also glad that you got your sync of this story and I will be looking forward to it that means I am going to stalk it haha.
What can I say but abit confused so far. Perfect for my OTP but the title not so much (gomen) reason being is that Mao (maybe I'm reading it wrong) is confused with her feelings for Jun?? and maybe Jun also I actually haven't come across the spark but I'm hoping throughout your story that they will.
Hopefully you won't shoot me for my comments haha. But I do like the fic its just the mystery of them having this spark and I'm hoping yes hoping that they both won't fall out of love before they realise it and not only that but trying to please their families. *rolls eyes* ok I think you get what I mean.
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Date: 2012-02-05 04:05 am (UTC)hmmm... the story doesn't fit the title (and vice versa), is that what you mean?
actually, believe it or not, there is a reason behind why the title is Perfect but the story starts with this... that much i do recall... and through the course of the story, i hope it slowly becomes clear why i chose the title (although originally, it was "Perfect Picture"...)
and with what i have in plan, let's just say that having them fall (?) in love in chapter 2 would be way too early for the story line... and, well, Perfect is about the two of them marrying because of their parents and grandfather's wishes...
hope you stick around to find out...
thanks! :)
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Date: 2012-02-05 08:00 am (UTC)Anyway yay thankyou for the quick reply. Oh definitely I ain't going anywhere anytime soon. So I will be stalking this fic like crazy haha.
Now what you have planned for them two is making me itch can't sit still cause I just want to know how everything will turn out.
Oops gomen haha no pressure. I will wait like a good little girl *crosses legs and arms*.
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Date: 2012-02-06 07:00 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-02-07 05:50 pm (UTC)glad you liked it... :)
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Date: 2012-02-06 11:29 pm (UTC)This entire friendly relationship they have seems very comfortable, but they do not seem to be in love with each other. But then, some of the best lovers started out as really good friends. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading this. It has a tempered pace for a love story (assuming it is one), which I find delightful.
I'm looking forward to how the story progresses! :D
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Date: 2012-02-07 06:00 pm (UTC)second, oh yes! this is most definitely a love story although it doesn't seem to really be one at this point. *grins*
it most definitely is! let's just say this particular story just starts out differently from the others...
thank you... i'm glad you liked it... and please do look forward to the updates... :)
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Date: 2012-02-07 04:41 pm (UTC)i can'tWAIT for more :D
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Date: 2012-02-07 06:01 pm (UTC)hope you enjoyed it and please do look forward to the next chapters... :)