a short story...

So, a recent genre movie marathoning i've gotten myself into inspired me to continue a fic concept i've had way before One Chance but dropped because i didn't know how to end it... i think that this time, i may just actually know how to make it work since...

1. i already have a plan on what happens, and
2. it would be just a short story...

so there...

TITLE: Learning from the Yoda
CHARACTERS: Matsumoto Jun, Inoue Mao, Takaki Yuya, Shida Mirai, Yamashita Tomohisa
PAIRING: Jun/Mao
RATINGS: PG
DISCLAIMER: The only thing i own in this story is the plot...
AUTHOR'S NOTE: this isn't a one shot but it isn't a novel either... it's somewhere in between... and i promise i'm not dropping One Chance...
SUMMARY: she needed to learn about men to avoid getting hurt severely ever again... it turns out that he was the right choice...
( “I see you haven’t forgotten me Mao-chan…” the guy said, flashing her a sweet smile. )

that's chapter 1...
so how is it?
tell me what you think...
comments/critics are welcome...